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Post by Sam on Jun 13, 2011 1:47:12 GMT
Cao got up from his seat and moved to the bench, and without even thinking about it put his right arm around Shang Xiang. "You seem to have brought many a trouble and concern north. All of this has been bottled up for a while yes?"
The girl was shaking, but it was not with fright, "By helping me you don't mess up the future of your country. If you help me unify the country, you help it for peace is restored all the more quickly. I would ask you what you would have us do to ease your distress, if you were not so uncomfortable talking of it." Cao smiled.
"But enough of this, you are obviously nervous and uncomfortable, and mine and Wenyuan's presence isn't helping that, would you like to be shown to a private room? You have had a long journey and perhaps a meal and some rest would ease your troubles? We can converse later if you would prefer it so."
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Post by Mikey on Jun 26, 2011 0:27:26 GMT
Using the Reward Rubric, this thread scored high in Plot, moderate in Conflict, high in Character Development, and moderate in Entertaining Factors. Scoring a 3.5. You three are really good writers.
Cao Cao - 20 Reputation Points for writing ability, 1 Benevolence Point, 1 SPECIAL Point.
Zhang Liao - 20 Reputation Points for writing ability, 1 Benevolence Point, 1 SPECIAL Point.
SSX - 20 Reputation Points for writing ability, 1 Benevolence Point, 1 SPECIAL Point.
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