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Xia KU
Apr 30, 2011 19:59:13 GMT
Post by Huang Zhong on Apr 30, 2011 19:59:13 GMT
"All things must end." - Xia Ku Name: Xia Ku Age: 19 (born:178) Gender: Male Style: Original height:6'3 weight:195 Residence:Yiing,Province of Jing Personality: Very clever. He can be humble at times but shows almost no ercy on the battle field.Has an eye for strategy Appearance: Apparel/Armour: Under his normal clothes (in pic) clothes may be dyed diffrent color depnding on force he wears very light padded armor Weapon(s): Dual swords lvl 3 with a short sword lvl 1 as back up History: Ku lived a easy life learing the art of battle at ayoung age. He was brought up in a wealthy family.With much power. They achived this power through Xia Ku's great grandfather His Great Grandfather Ji Ku was great friends with the head council member of Yiing long ago so they granted them a seat in the council . But the Ku family were very demanding and greedy so the one of the council mebers hired Bandits to attack and kill the Ku family.The bandits attacked and killed his father and mother.Ku slayed them from behind.Ku's mindset was changed that day nothing lasts forever. He employed the best trainers money could buy. Training for many years he got tired and decided to test his skill leaving all of his possesions to his younger brother. He seekes the ruler fit for him with the same ambition of utter domination. Current Information: Gold: 10 Reputation: 50 Entourage: Ronin
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Xia KU
Apr 30, 2011 20:20:01 GMT
Post by NPC Account on Apr 30, 2011 20:20:01 GMT
Time for my least favorite part of the job. Your character has a good base, but he really doesn't stand out. I'm not saying he can't be similar to anyone else, but I get more of a feeling of concept than character. I know this is going to be a pain, but can you give me a little more. I know he wears light armor, but what kind of light armor? What sort of power did his family have; when did they get it? Was it a random attack, or were the bandits hired to attack his family. If you develop the character a bit more, I think we'll be good.
-Brent
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Xia KU
Apr 30, 2011 20:28:28 GMT
Post by Huang Zhong on Apr 30, 2011 20:28:28 GMT
fixed
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Ai Rui The Guardian Wolf
Full Member
"Virtues, might, nor power win wars; it is the people who decide the ultimate outcome."
Posts: 126
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Xia KU
May 1, 2011 5:49:06 GMT
Post by Ai Rui The Guardian Wolf on May 1, 2011 5:49:06 GMT
Ok, welcome to the site. Make sure you purchase those weapons in the market place.
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Xia KU
May 1, 2011 10:35:09 GMT
Post by Huang Zhong on May 1, 2011 10:35:09 GMT
done
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